Fantastic animation. Nice and smooth with wonderful followthroughs! Well done :)
Why thank you. :)
I appreciate the work you put into making this. I know from experience that these things don't just pop out in 5 minutes. Having said that there is definitely lots of room for improvement. First and foremost the sound quality needs some tuning. It was sounding very warbled and tinny. The joke definitely has potential, working on comedic timing is really essential to pull this off. Remember, your animated characters aren't just pictures, they're your actors. There is some pretty heavy use of "tweening" in here that slows things down a bit. Lastly, I would focus on honing in on your drawing skills. You've got potential to make some good stuff but you've got to put the time in to push yourself in your drawing.
Thank you for sharing your project with us, I know that being critiqued isn't always fun and I hope what I've said will help you with your future animations :) If you ever need any help with your drawing I'm more than happy to tutor you a bit or at the very least critique your work.
All good very insightful yeah I really just freestyle I will focus on my animation and I agree with you our characters are our actors. I know I can work harder on my drawings and working in syncing everything together. Thank you for the tutoring offer but for now I think I'm going to keep at it, I hope you will watch my future videos to come ^^, cheers.
Really great. Did you guys switch animators? I notice the line art is much smoother in this episode. I really enjoy the series, well done guys!
Simple and fun to play. I think my only complaint is that the background is a little hard to look at. That kind of old tv static is a bit straining. Other than that I like it. Good job :)
This reminds me of some of the stills you would see in episodes of Ren and Stimpy, well done lol
Very well executed, I think my only recommendation would be rendering the hair a little more. Other than that, it's cute. Thanks for sharing!
Very well done, I like the composition :)
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