Fantastic animation. Nice and smooth with wonderful followthroughs! Well done :)
Why thank you. :)
I appreciate the work you put into making this. I know from experience that these things don't just pop out in 5 minutes. Having said that there is definitely lots of room for improvement. First and foremost the sound quality needs some tuning. It was sounding very warbled and tinny. The joke definitely has potential, working on comedic timing is really essential to pull this off. Remember, your animated characters aren't just pictures, they're your actors. There is some pretty heavy use of "tweening" in here that slows things down a bit. Lastly, I would focus on honing in on your drawing skills. You've got potential to make some good stuff but you've got to put the time in to push yourself in your drawing.
Thank you for sharing your project with us, I know that being critiqued isn't always fun and I hope what I've said will help you with your future animations :) If you ever need any help with your drawing I'm more than happy to tutor you a bit or at the very least critique your work.
All good very insightful yeah I really just freestyle I will focus on my animation and I agree with you our characters are our actors. I know I can work harder on my drawings and working in syncing everything together. Thank you for the tutoring offer but for now I think I'm going to keep at it, I hope you will watch my future videos to come ^^, cheers.
Really great. Did you guys switch animators? I notice the line art is much smoother in this episode. I really enjoy the series, well done guys!
The idea was funny, but left something to be desired as far as execution. I think if a little more thought had gone into the final product it would have resonated with me more. Still, I can tell you enjoyed yourself making this piece which is what's really important.
Fantastic animation, very fluid. Very well done :)
I'm really enjoying this series so far. I can tell a lot of time and effort went into doing this. I really appreciate all the hard work you guys put into this!
Yes, tons of hours spent making this series. Glad you can appriciate the hard work!
I really enjoyed this. Minecraft animations are always fun to see, but so many times they lack story. I look forward to seeing more episodes. Well done :)
Thank you and more episodes are on the way! Check back next Friday for episode 2.
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